From the praise lavished on Robert Macfarlane by the
critics, I expected this book to be something extraordinary. “Outstanding”,
“magnificent”, “utterly beautiful”, “sets the imagination tingling” are words
from the paperback edition (published 2012).
The book
This is an account of several walks (or boat trips) that the
author made. At the same time, it is an anthology of writing about walking. The
book includes references to many of literature’s well-known walkers, including
Rousseau, Wordsworth, Clare, Borrow – it’s no surprise that the bibliography cites
the anthology The Vintage Book of Walking. But it is not just a set of
references to well-known walkers and nature writers.
Vocabulary
The book is consciously poetic: he constantly strives for artistic
effect, yet the result is far less effective than W G Sebald, because Macfarlane
seems to be trying so hard to write beautiful and arresting prose, rather than
having something to say: or, to be more specific, because I don’t much like
what the author has to say, in Macfarlane’s case.
His technique is to stop you in your tracks while reading,
by choosing an unusual word, or by using a word in an unusual context. For
example, on the first page, describing the tracks made by human walking, he
compares natural tracks to walking on asphalt and concrete, “substances not
easily impressed”. Once or twice this trick makes you think; but every time it
happens, you stop and read again when you encounter an unusual word or context.
The author builds up a list of similar words, pointing out how they “become a
poem or rite” (just to remind us of the poetical associations): ”holloways,
bostles, shuts, driftways, lichways … “ and so on. Then we have path markers:
“cairns, grey wethers, sarsens, hoarstones, longstones, milestones … “ Yet
after enunciating all these magic terms for natural walks, Macfarlane walks
across a golf course for his first chapter: golf courses, the negation, almost
the denial of landscape. Golfers are in the landscape, but do their best to
ignore it.
Elsewhere, you feel a thesaurus has been brought into play. “Wordsworth’s
… knobbly legs … were magnificent shanks” [p16]. Dorset is “webbed with paths”.
Walking is also described as “tramping”, and “meandering”. The trope of switching subject and object
occurs frequently, for example “when a white object achieves perfect tuning
against snow … so the object is absorbed into the snow – or, audaciously, absorbs
the snow into it.” [p412]. The trick of using words to highlight polysemy is
emphasised: “they exist on two planes (plains)” [p412], as if the multiple
meanings enrich the text.
Is this vocabulary intended to convey meaning, or simply a
vague “poetic effect”? I can’t help feeling sometimes that the words used are
less specific than Macfarlane suggests. Names of plants, animals and birds are
used frequently and appear to me to be far more specific than is possible. In Sussex, the author walks along
the edge of the River Cuckmere : “my boot marks joined the tracks of heron, cormorant,
gull and egret”. I don’t imagine all of those prints would be distinguishable
by him. Instead, it is another example of a piling up of names.
Walking and paths
“Paths are the habits of a landscape”. Does he mean the
apparel, what a landscape wears? Does he mean the common activities carried out
in the landscape? Or the parts of a landscape that are so familiar to us? None
of the meanings quite fits; the narrative does not flow. But that seems to be
the intention.
“Paths connect. That is their first duty and their chief
reason for being.” I don’t agree; Macfarlane’s use of paths is not to go
anywhere. The use he describes is leisure walking, where you are happy to walk towards
no particular destination, simply for the pleasure of the walk. The purpose of
the path is for you to immerse yourself in an imaginary natural universe where
plants and animals have more of a chance than in the rest of the built
environment. You like it when the trees overhang and the vegetation is slightly
wild. You are seeking an experience of “nature” as somehow being more authentic
than the modern world we live in for most of the time. Macfarlane walks the Broomway
path to Foulness Island, and when he gets there, he turns round and comes back
again, partly because you aren’t allowed on Foulness without a permit, although
he doesn’t mention this. Nor does he mention there is a perfectly good road to
Foulness Island.
“Paths are consensual … because without common care and
common practice they disappear”. I would argue that most footpaths in England,
and probably elsewhere, are anything but consensual. They may have their origin
in ancient rights of way and droveways,
but the reality is that they only exist today because the authorities, often reluctantly,
concede their official existence; the local interests are usually keen to
remove them, to make them as unpleasant as possible, to make it clear to users
that their use by the public is tolerated at best. Farmers and land-owners lock
gates, make stiles impassable, and it is only rambling organisations who fight
to preserve access. That is an aspect of paths that seems not to interest the
author, who displays a curious innocence on this point. Not everyone loves
footpaths. In Palestine, where you might get shot for walking on a path, he
describes his fear – but that is a war zone, and is an exception to his typical
depiction of paths.
Perhaps the best descriptions of nature are those that don’t
set out only to be descriptions. Such descriptions are like the worst kind of
poetry, which sets out, within the limits of its metrical framework, to state
something beautiful. Darwin describes nature very well; he is interested in
what he sees, and describes it very carefully, but he is also interested in
what it means; not only in how beautiful it is, but how it came to be what it
is today. For me, Darwin (in The Voyage of the Beagle) conveys the magic
of landscapes, as well as awakening my curiosity. He demonstrates for me that a
scientific interest need not eliminate an awareness of beauty and ugliness. But
my reading of The Old Ways is that it is fundamentally an exercise in
the beautiful: despite references to the modern world, it is fundamentally
about a mythical countryside that no longer exists, and probably never existed.
I don’t find the people, and many of the places, mentioned
by Macfarlane stir my curiosity to discover more. One figure, that of Edward
Thomas, however, is central to the whole book.
Edward Thomas
Edward Thomas is an unlikely hero to be selected by an arts
professor. On the very slim evidence provided by the book, the verse is not
great:
Whatever the roads bring
To me or take from me,
They keep me company
With their pattering,
Crowding the solitude
Of the loops over the downs,
Hushing the roar of towns
And their brief multitude.
The author and his attitudes
Macfarlane is very coy about himself. There is no biography
for him in the paperback edition I read (published 2013). His Wikipedia entry,
and references to him on his books, state simply he is a Fellow. The website
for Emmanuel College Cambridge states he is Professor of Environmental Humanities,
which sounds to me unique (although Fiona Stafford, despite being a professor
of literature, in The Long, Long Life of Trees has compiled what in some
ways is a a similar miscellany that comprises mentions of every English and
American author, it seems, who has mentioned a specific tree variety).
I am not happy about Macfarlane's macho attitude to nature. A
walk cannot simply be a walk; it has to be life-threatening in some way. His
walk to Foulness Island is full of tales of how dangerous the walk is, how many
people have gone missing. If it is so dangerous, why does he feel the need to
walk it, especially since there is a perfectly sound road for vehicles he could
use? When he walks the Icknield way, he starts by cycling frantically, falls
off and breaks a rib or two. But he carries on walking. Why? Who is he trying
to impress? He walks for over ten hours, damages his feet, and sleeps outdoors.
Should we be impressed? Are we admiring nature or Mr Macfarlane’s exploits? On
a boat trip near the Hebrides, he sails at night in a boat that has no lights. In
Spain he falls asleep on a mountain ledge and then notices that vultures are
hovering overhead. Is this clever?
Only on page 363, the penultimate page of the book, do we
discover that Macfarlane has children: “Suddenly I feel a tidal pull homewards,
to my own children, wanting to keep them safe against harm and time.” This is
rather abrupt, given that the rest of the book depicts an author alone, a man
who wants to sleep outside by himself (more than once he sleeps by himself in
the “wild” rather than sharing accommodation with the others in his party). The author seems almost to admire that Thomas
walked away from his own family and children in World War One when, at the age
of 36, he enlisted, although he was not obliged to join the armed forces.
Cruelty
Macfarlane describes cruelty without comment, which suggests
some kind of acceptance. He seems to have no problem with the barbaric practice
on the remote Scottish island of Sula Sgeir of killing gannets. Two thousand
birds are killed each year, and the wings tossed aside and left on the island.
From Wikipedia [“Sula Sgeir”]:
The Sula Sgeir hunt, which would
otherwise be illegal under the Wildlife and Countryside Act 1981, receives
an annual licence from the government, which allows it to continue … The Scottish
SPCA describes it as "barbaric and inhumane" and believes it
causes unnecessary suffering to the birds, with many taking several blows to be
killed.
Neither does Macfarlane condemn the peculiar Steve Dilworth,
in the chapter Gneiss, who collects human and animal skeletons and decaying
corpses.
When he [Dilworth] was a student
in art college he’d taken an air rifle into the life-drawing class, sat by an
open window that overlooked a stand of trees, and shot any squirrels that
appeared. [p177]
I don’t imagine this charming activity improved the quality
of his own or of his fellow students’ life drawings.
Macfarlane and alcohol
The author makes it clear he enjoys drinking – nothing wrong
with that. But there are worrying references to a culture of drinking. “Within a
few minutes of arriving I was at the kitchen table with a coffee in one hand
and a gin and tonic in the other.” [p171]. In the episode described above where
he sees a vulture circling overhead, he continues: “I sat upright, making
vigorous signs of life and freedom, and it veered away. I didn’t need any help
damaging my liver.”
Macfarlane the traditionalist
Ships are always “she”. Weights and measures are given in
imperial units. There is an emphasis on British writers, artists and poets. Three-quarters
of the book is set in England and Scotland; the remaining chapters are set “abroad”.
Lack of specificity
There are so many references to places and to walks in this
book, but not a single map. I start to think that the references to places,
using wherever possible local names, are a tool for surrounding the subject
with mystery. Macfarlane’s preference is for walks where there is no map; where
you get instructions from someone you meet, who tells you vaguely where to go. It
seems to be somehow more exciting when you don’t know exactly where the path
is.
For a book about paths and walking, The Old Ways is
very lacking in signposts. Chapters are given a cryptic title that does not
indicate their contents. Chapter 3 is “Chalk”, while Chapter 14, also set on chalk
downs, is called “Flint”. Chapter 11 is “Roots”, yet is no more or less about
roots than the other chapters.
Conclusion
I love walking and I love nature. Sadly, I do not recognize
the nature or the attitudes described in this book. If Robert Macfarlane
invited me to join him on a walk, I don’t think I would want to join him. For
him, nature is there to provide danger, but to be conquered, either alone or (mostly)
in the company of other males. The Old Ways seems to me to be traditionally
male in its attitudes, and they are not traditions I am particularly interested
to share.